The Pirate Madeline: Ch1 Page 4 Giant X on the..

Alrigth! This is becuase these comics always have this critique option, so here we go.

Pirate Madeline also known as Hokey vs. Pokey is a classic cartoon from the early 1800s starring Mac Ingentio who was the main antagonist and also the voice of Pokey. Mike being a great actor decided to take the role a little further and murdered everyone on set, in order to take the place of Mark Intigeto the creator and illustrator of the show. Well.. this is getting pretty long... so without any actors or money, Michael Ignintendo decided to turn the tale of Pirate Madeline into a webcomic on DeviantArt.

In this installment it seems that Donatello is alone agains Hokey, however even though he is massively outnumbered, Raphael turns things around and somehow the entire Jacob family clan is defeated leaving only Mikey and Hokey to fight it out. However instead of a proper fight scene, like the show would have had, Leonardo tricks the evil witch by exposing the only spot where she would be safe, allowing Pokey to destroy Hokey by throwing his own head at her 20 times.

Vision:
I think Max Ingitedo has excellent eyesight

Originality:
This idea is completely original as Marcus has killed the original creator of the show and taken the idea.

Technique:
Miguel has trouble landing his high kicks which leaves him unable to perform necessary combos, for this he loses 1,5 star

Impact:
Morgan had only a dry churro left when he had to kill the original creator Mel Incognito, which leads me to believe it must have been quite and impact when the churro hit him.

All in all Mickey Iglotino achieved great success in stealing an idea and getting away with killing an entire film cast and crew.

Good job!

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