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:wow: It's Monday again... It's time for Pirate Madeline!

Last time on Pirate Madeline! Last time, The Skelly King continued his march across the seas to take over the human and beastman lands, but some force was standing against him! It was The Pirate Madeline! Madeline is revealed, can she stop The Skelly King?! Will she save the humans and beastmen?! All this and much more in this week's Pirate Madeline!


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:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
This page! Wonderful.
I cringed when I read it. Ha-ha.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you, I am glad you liked her intro so much :) I liked it too. 
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:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
No problem.
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:iconrallyguy33:
Rallyguy33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Skelly panic! Very cool bad ass intro to Madeline. And we haven't even seen her face properly yet. 
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It was fun to try to keep her in shadows so people didn't get her reveal into later when she shoots the Skelly's hand, it was great to do that reveal :) 
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:iconflamingreapercomic:
FlamingReaperComic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Intro! Sent me chills down my spine.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awww Thanks Reaper! :) Like good chills or oh my god, what is up with this comic? lol I joke XD 
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Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
this page needs some bgm like "just comunication" from Gundam wing (including the "red alert" of the background)
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I would love that! Great music choice :) 
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:iconhighlordsalemjustice:
I'm re-reading some of these older pages and I just wanna say how awesome this intro is.
I hope you're proud of these pages because you definitely should be.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you man I am glad you really liked it, it is better to read it all at once, it makes a lot more sense, I think Pokey turning on Madeline was more obvious when you see what he did in the beginning to Kayne 
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:icondabzen:
DabZen Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
The Goosebumps says it all...
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Dabbey! :) I am happy you liked the intro stuff I was worried people would be confused 
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:iconlinker96:
Linker96 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
My favorite page till now. I Really love the build up you managed to convey on it :nod:
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you dude :) I hope so 
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:iconosaekomimax:
OsaekomiMax Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice build up to that last panel! Great work!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks man, I had to get it eventually this is my third try lol :) Even someone as dumb as me can do it eventually XD 
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:iconadamantis:
adamantis Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist
Nice buildup over the last few pages to introducing the title character :)
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Adamantis! :iconsuperonionplz: I wanted her to be cooler this time 
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:iconlufidelis:
lufidelis Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome pages!!! I really love the angles, are pretty great
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Lucy, I have to draw them a few times until I get it XD 
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edwardrigaud Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i enjoyed reading these pages Headbang! keep them coming :)
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks ED! I am happy you enjoyed them! :iconkaminaonionplz: Your works are great 
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:iconstruphic:
Struphic Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love that last frame man!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Struphic!!! :iconkaminaonionplz: I really appreciate all the comments you gave me, sorry for the delay I try to answer everyone in full 
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Struphic Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, I understand.
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negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013

interesting titles but....

DID SHE JUST BEAT A GIANT ROBOT WITH HER BARE HANDS!?

 

...someone had to say it, in all caps, my apologies. it's an impressive feat in almost any series.

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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: If I showed Madeline's robot, or showed the fight it would take away from the point also I want the reveal to happen later, but no, the Golem Madeline has beat the other Golem 
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:iconnegativedarkangel:
negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013

well, that makes more sense, but then where did hers go? does the pirate pilot a ninja? maybe I should be a bit more serious here. i'll just let the comic reach it's eventual answer.

oh, yeah, fair warning, ask :icontlwelker: I guess plots a lot, and i'm fairly hard to trick. I usually guess the contents of the next page almost every time I comment over there, i'll likely do the same here. It's a hobby.

 

....man my imagination is amazing sometimes. in case you're wondering I just picturing this being some kinda power rangers-esque clash where it somehow always ends with a giant robot battle. which is about the only reason I watched power rangers back then ironically, probably because DBZ spoiled me horribly on hyper-dramatic non-mecha battles. I'm not quite so picky anymore.

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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Madeline is standing on it. No no, the golem/robot is not a ninja. It can transform I don't want to give too much away. :iconlaughingplz: 

If you want to give it a try, I would like to hear it :w00t: 

:iconlaughingplz: The Golems will get a lot of time, but it won't be a Villain of the week type deal. It will always make sense. Thanks Negative 
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:iconnegativedarkangel:
negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
haha, yeah. well next page will be full of more exposition, obviously. *morphs back into captain obvious and flies away*
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol I guess I am different in that from TL, nope that was the last page of exposition for now :lmao: 
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:iconnegativedarkangel:
negativedarkangel Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
hehe, don't draw conclusions just yet, but okay.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
As you saw in the one I posted, although you might be able to guess the new one now 
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:iconkimeria87:
Kimeria87 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student General Artist
This is so amazing and awesome! I really love the colors and details! Very amazing job!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much Kimeria!!! :iconranranruuplz: Awww you're too sweet thanks so much :) I wanted to do my best when showing Madeline appear 
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Kimeria87 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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:iconinisipis:
inisipis Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Well there goes one busted Golem. Perhaps it would be more effective for the Skellys combat skills if they aren't staring to all those Warning screens all over.:D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: She can say- but officer, it was like that when I got here... 

They were running away lol where do you run in a Golem Mech? lol I dunno I'm sure they escaped though 
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inisipis Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Someone seems to have forgotten to put up the blinking Exit screen. I bet the Skelly crew are jumping through that large hole like a pack of Lemur.Come With Me
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
LOL :iconlaughingplz: OH NO!!! Well they can't really "die" they are already skeletons lol 
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aaronmizuno Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
That's a fantastic intro. Super powerful!

Keep it comin'!

I want to see how she became so revered~
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: The comic in general will say that part, I won't go into detail until after this arc 
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Shinobi-Gambu Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Hellz yeh.  Most epic entrance ever :D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Gambu, I hope so, I worked hard on this intro :iconsuperonionplz: 
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The-Quill-Warrior Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Again, great composition! And you build up Pirate Madeleine really well with all the names she's been given like "The Living Ghost" and "The Goddess of the Seas".
I should really take lessons in writing like that for my comic. XD
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: She looks so cool now right?  Thanks Quill, writing? Like my writing? I dunnoo XD LOL 
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The-Quill-Warrior Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
X3
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013
Man dude, think even Kratos from God Of War would be feeling a slight shiver down his spine after seeing this and damn excellent lead-up to how extremely badass Madeline is! 

Was really liking how well you managed to lead up with your other pages towards the Madeline universe but this one really takes the cake.  The whole way you scale from the insanity in the giant golem to the lone shot of her is what really nails her name and character for more than just your average air head pirate girl, wow!

Mind you Madeline has always been a badass in my mind but this is what really helps bring out the sheer power of one's character towards the rest of the public.  Right from the start per say you get that glimpse of who and greatness she has to offer you than what you expect from just a first glance.

Additionally you don't let up either on the conniving angles for the images giving you that almost cinematic quality to the image like your just starting off the movie and you can't wait to see what waits for you next, very well done Random.  Might add excellent work with adding the darkness towards Madeline in the last few panels to continue that level of seriousness your directing her character towards, again you do excellent to not stray from where you want your fans going (attention wise) with this character.

Oh yes and spectacular work on the exploding body of the golem  with not just the chunks breaking off but a nice touch towards the falling smoke to show you even more destruction and breaking down its facing right now, really well done man. o0o

Later,
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Tim that was an awesome review, I am speechless. Thanks for saying that man! :iconsobeautifulplz: 

I am trying my absolute best, this is the final time no more restarts. I have 98 pages I can't use, and I don't want 100 XD 
I put great care into the directing, I am not the best artist, but I know how I want the scenes to go, I'm glad you felt it was effective. 
The rock effects were done after to give it that 3D effect. 

:wave: Thank you again Tim 
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