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:wow: It's Monday again... It's time for Pirate Madeline! Last time on Pirate Madeline! Madeline meets the mysterious young man named Random Everetti who claims to have stolen something of high value from the evil Skellies group, Madeline then challenges him to a match to not make her meeting with him quite so obvious, but what's this?! Madeline seems to be taking this battle quite seriously, and SO does Random!!! And is Madeline---cheating?! Did she literately have a "trick up her sleeve"?! Who will come out on top? Can Random stop Madeline's watch? All this and more in this week's Pirate Madeline.

**Sidenote Hey guys it's me Random. :iconrandommode: Sorry I've been super, super busy this week, wiring things, taping things, learning things, it's been nuts, you'll see soon hopefully. Man, you know what's crazy looking at this page? I have the Funamation channel, where they show anime all day, and I am not sure if it's the anime they show or what not, but I haven't seen a blue action screen in anime in a LONG time. I hope everyone is enjoying the story, and yes I will appear and comment on your pages, sorry if I haven't already, I have been doing my best. I am a turtle you know, so I'm not fast lol

ALSO! Apologizes to darkskinlove group, I didn't check the options and it auto submitted, usually there is someone with tanned skin, totally sorry on this XD lol

©Pirate Madeline and all characters within Officially copyrighted with the U.S. government 2009-2013 M. INGENITO
Madeline is copyright© to M.Ingenito HEY! Check out Madeline's other comics!!! :ahoy:

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:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
The traces are even better!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Traces? 
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:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
Traces, lines.
You can call them how did you want.
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:iconregreme:
Regreme Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
Don't know why, but it's not letting me go to your main page. Anyways, just wanted to thank you for the devwatch.^^
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It is not loading? Or it is blocked? I don't have you blocked Regreme 
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:iconregreme:
Regreme Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
It wasn't loading. Thankfully, whatever was causing the issue apparently was a temporary issue.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
YAY!! :) 
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:iconrallyguy33:
Rallyguy33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Double speed! Wow that's a handy watch. I need one of those!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I also made the watch look like "XD" face :) 
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:iconrallyguy33:
Rallyguy33 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
Oh man, you totally did. Love that!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks man! :iconranranruuplz: 
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:iconflyerscurse:
Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
oh!! I remember that!! last time he had some "help" on defeating her
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconthatsrightplz: You're totally right but things turned out a bit different 
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:iconprojectmetanoia:
ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fantastic cell shading and expressive style! Keep it up!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you ma'am I hope you will devwatch me :) 
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:iconprojectmetanoia:
ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

I'll watch you in exchange for your take on some of my deviations?! Deal? :eager:

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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol Ummmm XD 
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:iconprojectmetanoia:
ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe
alas, shall we part ways for now? :iconfinallyplz:
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Your choice ma'am 
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Salem-the-Psychic Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
I burn from Rwby would be a great theme for Madeline.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
The web animation? 
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Salem-the-Psychic Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Yeah
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:iconthenightsurfers:
thenightsurfers Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
I love the way you conveyed the action!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you man! I'm glad to see you again it's been awhile 
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:iconthenightsurfers:
thenightsurfers Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
Haha, yeah, I've been pretty busy lately that I've kinda let DA slip through the cracks.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
XD I know how it is 
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Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Professional General Artist
What time is it? Super watch time? Dynamic post time? Action page time?! VS TIME?!

No it's 1:14pm...calm down.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks GX3R I did a new one today as well :) 
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Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Professional General Artist
I think I will ...view it!  O:<
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DRAKEFORD Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, when you submit this page?' pffffffffffffff XD Kick his ass Madeline, !!!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It was a Tuesday- sorry it took a long time, I did a new one today too 
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DRAKEFORD Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yep, I saw the page, great work dude, Madeline rocks !!!
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Really nice setup from the last page dude and damn if you already can't tell there's a fight about to brew between these two then you need to get your Pokey checked, lol.

The added touch of the Magic Watch I have to say is a brilliant touch, right off the hop.  Given that Madeline is a pirate, its nice to see that your considering of uping her arsenal than just the normal gun and sword and even giving some mystery and allure to her.  That's actually one the reasons why the characters from One Piece are so awesome because they have more to themselves than just what you'd expect and hell bonus points on that double speed action!

As for anything else a good use of heavy action lines here for again the speed up for Madeline to even the way its show about Random.  Should add too a nice idea to vary up not only the angle of the lines but even so much as to change the colors from one character to the next is one the best and simplest ideas to help keep fans from getting lost.

Its nice to see you didn't get into too much detail as to him sitting Pokey down or Madeline in some kind of powering up mode with her watch but the simple action of her using it and some added perspective to show that sudden change of positioning.

The nicer effects like seeing here are the way the watch glows with its own blue metallic energy and even the action and expressions on Madeline herself feel very real and intense for the situation at hand here.  In anycase no need to speed on my friend, Madeline is doing that already, lol.

Later,
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Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol He actually is in there if you look carefully (Pokey is) You can see Pokey's shell on Random's shoulder. That's very true, Madeline is not like other Pirate girls, she has a giant rock robot, she has a magic gun and magic items, she's very different. Yeah I know what you mean about not wasting time powering up I read a lot of mangas, and they usually do waste a lot of time, to be fair they got to put out 15 pages a week so I can understand why they do it, but it can get a bit tedious. Also the face of the clock is the "XD" face lol 

Thanks Tim, I really appreciate you taking time out to comment in detail about my comics, you make all the work feel worth it. :iconkaminaonionplz: 
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:iconminordiscrepancy:
MinorDiscrepancy Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh man how is he going to deal with double speed!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
We'll see :) 
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Kimeria87 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow, this is so incredibly awesome! I love the speedlines and the poses too! Very dramatic!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Kimeria  I'm glad you liked it, I am working super hard on the next one sorry it is taking awhile 
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Kimeria87 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student General Artist
Please take your time! :hug: No rush at all. 

Aww you're welcome :huggle:
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ManiacPaint Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
PROBLEMO?  :icontrollrollplz:
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconimhappyplz: I am MADDIE!

Thank you for looking MP you are the coolest bro! :iconkaminaonionplz: 
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RenzoWhitt Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm loving this new page!  I can't wait to see more!  The only thing that
I have to say is her hand in the 3rd panel seems off.  It looks like it's
supposed to be the left hand however, her body posture wouldn't
suggest that she crossed her arm across her body.  Other than that
looking good bro. 
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I probably should have thought of that a little better :lmao: 
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:iconrenzowhitt:
RenzoWhitt Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
It's all good man.  I'm here to help.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconherotimeplz: <---- Renzo 
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:iconrenzowhitt:
RenzoWhitt Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LMAO!!!
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tlwelker Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist
AWWW YISS, superb shots dude! Nicely done!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks, it's very boy's manga I know lol 
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:iconmystic-skillz:
mystic-skillz Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Round 1 Fight!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
LOL You got it :) 
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