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:wow: It's Wednesday again... It's time for Pirate Madeline! Last time on Pirate Madeline!!! Last time, Madeline and Pokey were running away from an angered Random who was firing Pokey Bombs at them, but can Madeline's magic watch out run them all?! Will Pokey think of a brilliant plan? Will Madeline outlast and defeat Random? Will Random really end Madeline right now? All this and more in this week's Pirate Madeline! 

Is anyone else getting multiple errors when they try to upload? It took me no less then 11 tries to upload this picture, I was trying to have it up last night. None the less here we are! :) 


©Pirate Madeline and all characters within Officially copyrighted with the U.S. government 2009-2014 M. INGENITO
Madeline is copyright© to M.Ingenito HEY! Check out Madeline's other comics!!! :ahoy:  randommode.deviantart.com/gall… randommode.deviantart.com/gall…
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:icondewani90:
Dewani90 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
tie her up a lot, random was on bondage... just kidding.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
LOL One can only guess as to what Madeline means 
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:icondewani90:
Dewani90 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
pokey is not amused... on the last panel he had a "really?" face =3=
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
lol He was like "really?" because of what Madeline said, she saw right through him, although she is wrong about Random XD 
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:icontanajuraatomica:
Definitivelly a villain. Or not... Kinda.
Okay, I think this commentary was not necessary...

Good job!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol Random is a Villain or Madeline? They are both saying the other one is lol 
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:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
Haha.
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:iconrallyguy33:
Rallyguy33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Pokey is a riot. But Madeline is about to unleash a deadly attack. I'm guessing it's going to put Random in his place.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
She certainly did :) lol 
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:iconflyerscurse:
Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I can hear him say "best job ever!"
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconranranruuplz: That is very true lol 
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:iconprojectmetanoia:
ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That little, blue character is absolutely adorable.
Nice panelling, and flush clean style. I wish I had more time to read the comic!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: Thank you he is a turtle man named Pokey :) It's cool you can always read it later 
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:iconprojectmetanoia:
ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe latter in the 'in a few months' sense maybe :XD:
No worries ^w^
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It happens it's okay 
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ProjectMetanoia Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:icondragonnodplz:
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:iconcluedog:
cluedog Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
That is one lucky Pokey!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOL So he thinks 
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:icongx3rcomics:
Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Professional General Artist
That Pokey has some serious grip for a non fingered turtle clinging to them smooth legs.
I question your commitment to realism Random! I thought your series was based in reality, clearly, I was wrong! D:

I like the poses in this one, and Randoms scarf dispenser, must come in handy after a restroom visit. :V
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOL Pokey has magic fingers that appear when the story needs them to be there :iconlaughingplz: 

LOL It's so realistic. Just look at Madeline's hair and costume! You are wrong! LOL :) 

Random's scarf is great for any occasion, swings, towing, making sandwiches! lol Thanks man :) I am glad you liked it 
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Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
Madelines hair is very realistic, just look at Milla from Tales of Xillia, and that game is tooootaly realistic *wink* :V
Hey, one of your readers has to be an ass right?

I noticed! Where did he get it, it's clearly no QVC scarf that's for sure.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol MAN! Today this very day, someone was saying Milla didn't look like Madeline I knew she did XD 

No not at all :iconlaughingplz: The scarf will be explained later in detail but I can give a bit and say it is a gift from Zhin. 
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Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
Hey, hey....hey....

At least they said your character looks like a girl, the only character I've heard Neige looked like is Cloud.

Which blows, my, mind! >:L Not even the same bloody gender *foams at the mouth and tears the wallpaper down*
:| Anyway, yes, Milla, playing that game now, I like her, I like Madeline, it's all good.

So...what you're saying is, it wasn't purchased off a station where the people selling items once nearly impaled himself with a sword that snapped during a durability demonstration? D: Shame, I bet a scarf demonstration would wind up with something funnier.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol Well she doesn't look exactly like Cloud XD 

She is very boring compared to Madeline (Milla is) So I don't mind. LOL Random got the scarf at Wharf-Mart :iconlaughingplz: 
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Gx3RComics Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
She's missing about 15 liters of hair gel, the wool shirt and a 500 pound slab of metal on a stick, also the whole different anatomy thing is a bit of a thing to point out! I'm betting if she was in a green top, I'd hear "she looks like Link!" someone lend me their master sword, I need to throw myself onto it!

I like the two, actually Milla is why I bought the game, I was interested for some reason, why? Maybe the mane of hair. Maybe that was the same draw to you, or was it that damn avatar of yours that brings endless joy and a smile every  reply you deliver? Curse you.

:V wharf-harf-harf-harf, I see what you did tharrrr
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Right. Girl Cloud is Lightning anyway XD 

Well I get that a lot, Madeline looks like B Jenet from Mark of the Wolves, Pokey looks like Squirtle, Random looks like....every anime male lol 

Pokey should be added to every video game. lol XD Wharf Mart 
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:iconnightshide:
nightshide Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional General Artist
Excellent work, my friend!! I loves your design page!! very dinamic!!I loves :D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Nightshide :) I am glad you liked the comics! 
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Linker96 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Pokey only works with gorgeus people, I can see that :O
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
The next page will show what Pokey is doing Page 24
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014
Well I feel your pain on the 11 tries, this comment here had to re-write 2 times now because my internet has suddenly decided to crash and then reboot right after the page has failed to respond.  Okay maybe its not that close but anything its something relate able at least, lol.

Here you showed alot of strive with Madeline and the action scene you left us hanging with before, bravo to that lad.  You picked up the pace right off the bat and like before you leave the characters very much in frenzy and even throwing some witty banter in the middle of things, nicely plaid.

Like a few fans have said a great job with adding so many elements of Pokey's nature here but even more with just keeping things both fun and full of action.  And you actually made it happen, the only time where I've ever wished to be Pokey, curse that lucky turtle!

Smoking good work withe pace of this image too though man, really mean that.  Hate when seeing some comics slow things down and one character use the same bloody attack so many times it makes the fight seem so lame.  In that way your clever to have actually tossed in the way each Madeline and Random are sort of getting used to one another's attacks which in truth shows the meaning of what really goes with a good fight.

Also great work adding in the effects like before withe countless explosions and even more action lines to show the speed of the image/setting right now.  Especially like Madeline for your focus on her to show not just the fact she's running but using good body movement and perspectives to indicate that.

Even cooler is the way you throw in Pokey this time around and truthfully in his usually wacky sense but definitely being a huge part of the picture here especially.  Your getting really good to try and include more faces to your work and I personally really enjoy how you keep Madeline in the picture in one way with the one panel of Pokey hugging her leg even though she isn't fully in the picture.

Good show as well adding in the many extra finer features to your work like the classic anime gleam from that badass pistol she's got, the light green smudge above Pokey's hand as he moves to grab the pistol or just the actions lines themselves.  

Adding to that on a final note a great job throwing in alot of variety with your backgrounds making not just the characters a great thing about the work but the scenery as well.  Its hard to explain but its neat the way you change the angles and it goes from the far off perspective of the sky in one shot to the distant shipyard like in the last panel.  Shows very clearly your paying attention not just to your work but keeping every other element going as smoothly as possible for the fans to enjoy.  Thumbs up to your Random.

Later,
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Tim! Dude you really struggled to get this done! Thank you so much for always taking the time out for me. :) I try my best to correct my mistakes every time eventually I will make good comics LOL :) Thanks a lot dude 
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
Meh its nothing compared to the work you no doubt slaved over to get this one done.  At least you had an Undo button to fix your mistakes, mine.....not so much. ^O^

Dude its funny that you continue to press on that your not good at making comics and already your quality far surpasses some of the work seen other people in the comic book industry try to pass off as art.  Nothing at all against them though but if anything counts from the lowly crab is that you clearly got great talent within those tiny turtle hands of yours. *high fives*

Later,
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol Well ..........it is better to be humble then to boost and be put in your place :) You know? lol Crabs and Turtles have a lot of powers 
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
Indeed we do lad.  We didn't survive past those sissy ass dinosaurs for nothing you know!

Later,
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
We got the hard exteriors of armor greatness! lol 
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fokker103 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I'd tie her up any day
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
It didn't work out too well. randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
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diskfire Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
I swear the first thing I though of when Madeline said "Grab my gun" was her and Pokey flying off on a rainbow shouting "ADVENTURE!". :XD:
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA :iconlaughingplz: HAHAHAHAHAHA I laughed a lot in real life when I read that, oh man, do you have the template? I will make one :) 
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diskfire Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Okay I will do it! lol 
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:iconstruphic:
Struphic Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome battle and banter! Is Pokey going full defection? I guess the proper incentive helps...
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I don't want to give it away. You will seen soon. :iconplanningplz: LOL He would agree 
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thenightsurfers Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
I love the motion blur!  So action-y!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
That came from a lot of me watching animes and reading mangas, because my instinct would be to do the jagged ink lines like a manga, but I feared it would look too violent like it was some kinda death spin instead of gentle sort of thug of the arm. lol So I thought to just lightly blur it, and sure enough that worked WAY better. 

:iconkaminaonionplz: Thanks Night! :) 
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:iconthenightsurfers:
thenightsurfers Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
Ah, I see!  And no prob, Random!

Oh, btw, you can call me Chris. :)
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry I will XD 
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:iconvyctorian:
Vyctorian Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   General Artist
Lovely work on the last panel!~
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you Vy That's very kind of you 
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