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:wow: It's Monday oops TUESDAY again... It's time for Pirate Madeline! LAST TIME ON PIRATE MADELINE! Last time, the evil Einen Kayne found out Random and Pokey have been taken to Madeline's ship, she then called forth the Manta Ray, a super next generation Golem, but what's this? Kayne seems to have a lot to say about Random and his friend! Will Kayne stop Random? Will Pokey hit on Kayne and Zhin? Will we finally figure out what this girl wants? All this and more in this week's Pirate Madeline. 

(Side note: Oh my good god the amount of revisions this page went through I would go on about how I redrew it and redrew it and redrew it, but, no I won't, let's say it took a long time to decide how to approach this information. I also hope Random's Dragon is looking way better. Comment down below, see you guys next week)

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zeromythos5 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wait that "man" isint my "master"?
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
A Dragon has to listen to a master. Again this page: The Pirate Madeline Page 20: Hi I'm Pokey! by Randommode  I will explain this is greater detail later, but for now, just take it Einen Kayne is not happy to bow down to Random 
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zeromythos5 Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
if you say that the dragon has to listen to a master then einen kayne is a dragon? but why is she disobey and destroy him
oh wait she said she only wanted random everete and shes kinda jealous so i take it she wanted to be with random in the beginning? 
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Professional Digital Artist
I don't want to get too much into spoilers here. But Einen.... isn't QUITE like Random. 

Random has a dragon spirit that obeys him and gives him power. But Einen Kayne, is a dragon that controls a human body completely.


She likes Random, she does not want to be his "servant" however, Random did not tell her to be a servant to him, this is just her fear talking, and also that she is afraid Random would make her stop being bad. 

I hope this explains it- I WILL 100% explain in depth as the story continues. 
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FreezingKaiju Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist
Why's a black dragon in the background, and more importantly, who painted it red and painted its horns grey?
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
lol It's Random's Red Dragon 
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FreezingKaiju Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Hobbyist
www.dandwiki.com/w/images/5/57…
That's a red dragon.
This:
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/d…
is a black dragon, and resembles Random's dragon far more.
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FreezingKaiju Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Hobbyist
"And your little dog, too!"
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
LOL I was VERY tempted to but that line in as "Your little turtle too" but my brother said it was too funny at the wrong time 
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FreezingKaiju Featured By Owner Edited Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist
"WAAAAAH! I WANNA CONQUER THE WORLD! IT SHOULD BE MINE! MINE MINE MINE MINE MINE! WAAAAAH!"
Geez, what a whiner. Reminds me of my grandma.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Muaha As long as you realize that was the joke here, no one is saying Einen makes sense, she is acting bizarre :) 
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Azurilla12 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Good work!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Th Th060 Thanks so much 
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Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
the plot tickens!!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Stare  I planned out so much 
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Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
you and your evil schemes!!
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Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
LOL :) 
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TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
Yeyah, everybody loves dragons, pirates, girls and comics.
You're doing gold, Randommode, gold.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Shy  Thanks for saying that! I hope so 
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TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
No problem.
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spacezillazon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
just classic good job
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
LOL My friend was saying I drew a Kawaii dragon here I dunno it's a girl but is it too cute? 
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spacezillazon Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ok
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FireheartTheInferno Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Woo! Epic last panel!

And look, a wide shot of his cool scarf! Awesome!
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Randommode Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I love this page I am not sure how everyone felt, thank you so much dude! Kawaii Turtle 
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FireheartTheInferno Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure, friend!
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JoelGTDan Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Student Artist
SO mush hatred I sense in Kayne but sadly for her she will not get her wish. Random just isn't the type to back down easily!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:) LOL We will see, thank you Joel 
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MemorialComics Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Filmographer
lol wow so muc hate for random lol 
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:lmao: She really does 
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MemorialComics Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Student Filmographer
lol , she just want t D for random that all 
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
To date? lol 
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MemorialComics Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Student Filmographer
yeah 
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DRAKEFORD Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aWESOME PAGE !!!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconranranruuplz: Thanks so much Drake I am happy you liked it :) 
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imbisibol Featured By Owner Edited Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohhhh... so that's why. Random's quite the mystery guy ain't he? :D

Anyway, those ember flying off her eye patch is a pretty cool effect. I can feel her rage! XD
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconranranruuplz: He is, but I hope I explained a lot more here. :) Those embers show how much magic power she has 
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imbisibol Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's overflowing! Or maybe her anger's put a dent on her limiter or something. Awesome stuff!
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Randommode Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol You may be onto something but I don't want to spoil it 
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FuzzyBridges89 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok that woman looks really pissed; and i really like that panel, it really gives an intense vibe.
what's her name?
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: Einen Kayne is always upset, I think even page 1... no wait she was happy because she was trying to kill Random LOL She really hates Random. Thanks so much Fuzzy! :) 
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FuzzyBridges89 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome.....
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
There will be more to come XD Did you want to say something? 
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ShadowFrost1 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014
Her left eye's been bothering me for awhile. Maybe she should see a doctor :3 I kid. But ooh, master? So he's the master? Wonder if this is the same as the mook trying to become stronger than the final boss?

Ehh speaking game terms again. Love the lighting here, almost said lightning, but introduction of dragon makes me grin. Will we see that soon?
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Which left eye? In which panel? 

Nih by TheOnionHead He is not quite a master like you think, Kayne is not very nice, she is saying it in a very one-sided manor as if Random is a tyrant. The truth is it is more like a shared existence, but since Kayne is a liar, I won't have her explain the symbiosis between a Master and the Spirit animal, in this case herself being a Dragon, until much later, but as Random's Red acts towards him randommode.deviantart.com/art/… it is more of a partnership. Red (Both the good and bad red dragon) refer to Random as "Master" but this is a symbol of respect, in Kayne's case a mockery, but she can choose not to share her powers with him, and even to disagree. 
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ShadowFrost1 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
@_@ gotten so busy I couldnt enjoy any comics of yours

Specifically if we were standing right beside her facing the same direction. So basically from our perspective her eye that's on the right. With that intriguing glow under the eyepatch

Ah makes sense. They definitely act more like partners than anything. So that's not the case for Kayne and the dragon then. But now I wonder where the dragon is?
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Like the eyepatch isn't lined up right when she is facing us? Or sideways? 

I will go into a lot more detail but I can't right now in the next few pages. :) She Kayne IS the dragon, so what you should be asking is- what happened to the person who's body she is in now? Dun dun dun lol :) 
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Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Love those moments in ANY anime or tv show where you get to see the brooding of the bad guys.  Granted they do that in movies too but for some reason it just seems to work much more fluent-like when its comic books, as you already know that's what you can expect of them, lol.

But way to show the serious ambition of one little badass here Random, you handle very maturely instead of silly her need to want to rule, why she wants to do and even more the people who she sees as her opposition.  Yikes, can't jump that far into the comment, barely started it!  ^O^

Regardless of that its neat the way each panel though very different are each setup from still the same standpoint of her standing there.  Really am impressed with a method like that where you can tell much more to your effectively and do little to change the scenery in a way.

But the middle panel has it down for me lad, total win there.  Those many speech bubbles floating around her and haunting in one way and the even the white light showing what might be the close-up of what its like in her mind and then it moves to the last panel where she sees her enemies. That alone is great work any way that you try and slice it dude, lol.

Along with some other great touches your adding like the bright glow effects, the scaling in the last panel to show Random truly being the center of all her hatred, you've done very well to stop the story if only just a moment and focus on what makes your villain tick.  Brilliant work lad, nuff said.

Later,
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Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I think when it comes to the comic, that everything can be silly, and derpy, and funny, but the actual core of the Pirate Madeline story needs things to make some kind of sense, for the threats to be real, and the villains sinister, Dragon Ball Z also did this very well. Thank you Tim, this big speech of hers spans 2 more pages, and it's funny because when you read it together you can see how mad she is- but then it goes right back to being silly, so I mean, it's good to be serious, but I kinda hate to do it :) 

Thanks very much man :wave: 
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thenightsurfers Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Uh oh, Random's in trouble!
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