It's Monday oops Tuesday again... It's time for Pirate Madeline!
Last time on Pirate Madeline!!! Last time Madeline began a seemingly fake fight with Random Everetti, but then pulled out a magic watch and charged him a full speed! But what's this?! Does Random have tricks of his own?! What will Random do? What is Madeline's true goal? How is Pokey still holding on to Random, is he crazy glued back there?! All this and so much more in this week's Pirate Madeline.
Side Note: Guys, sorry working on the show has been draining, there is so much to do I never have a free moment, none-the-less, I made sure to put this out for you. There may be more delays but as I said way back when I will continue to put out Madeline pages. Thanks everyone for all your support. Special thanks to
I also want to thank and for making recent fan arts of Madeline, I will add them when I get another moment. Again, I thank you all for commenting and reading, thanks very much you guys show your appreciation when you comment even one or two words makes a big difference. See you again soon!
Sorry for the delay Minor, lol Well it was a challenge. I had to draw the landing and keep it as pg as I could But still make it as exciting as if any one (of the other characters) landed in an aggressive stance.
Argh, trial number 3 with having to write up this comment, internet don't fail this crab now! ^o^
Man this is pretty damn awesome dude, reminds me of One Piece where they take something simple in a fight and really impress it up from all those cool angles and good action sequences to keep it going.
Anything that's very well applies here on the way you work out the re-actions of Random and Pokey to Madeline from the last pic. The lead-up pays off with that first panel and how she already is so close to her target and even the way you fit in the shocking look of Pokey and Random really adds that good ground to know where she's directing herself towards.
As things go on though, neat to see that you have some magic in the midst there with that nice little block there. The symbols are really stylized like you'd see on some good shows and even where you take a point to have the shot zoom into the character just to show that tenseness of everything is downright glorious.
And not just throwing her back but good you flesh it out with those extra few panels and finally that perspective shot that has her flying back into the air.
Can get into some details about seeing more booty close-ups on Madeline but I think its best to leave that out now, lol. As for anything else though, good twist on that final angle to get both your conversation Random is trying to get started and even some allure with Madeline's landing and how the legs impacted on the ground. Know that doesn't sound that awesome, but anything it gives the energy your trying to show here between them as opposed to her landing straight standing up which kind of slows the pace down.
Either way its getting good Random, do keep it up.
lol I did a lot of reediting so people would not confuse my good camera work for exploitation There are those who want to harshly judge everything because they think they are some sort of critic or are funny, so I do watch myself more then I used to (As far as Madelines landing or jumping)
Thanks very much Tim you truly understand my works
Well that's the hard thing is know when or if the angling is too much, but given your action sequence right now, its all that more effective towards your comic and telling the story.
You make a good point about others judging one another too much and these days find it now more then ever everyone seems to over analyze the work instead of appreciating the entirety of it all. Guess that makes it one more reason why these crabby comments are much less annoying to read. *falls over laughing*
You made quite the point, one which Madeline is going to point out in a minute on the next page, however it was a "magic type spell" I don't want to give anything away, someone said- "Oh that seemed pointless" but no it isn't you'll see why Madeline is doing this.
see, I saw that comment, but not everyone can share such an analytical mind as my own, even the most seemingly inconsequential of details can foreshadow things years in advance! reference page 2 of 8-bit theater if you don't believe me, reference that and then skip to the last page (not the epilogue the last page thing of the actual plot), I called it way back on page 2.
if you're not gonna reference, i'll make it easy for you, called that 4 years and over 1000 pages in advance.
Thanks when I went into this one I had a frame of reference from the other two, last time I think he (Random) was a bit rude to her, and I think Madeline was a bit too passive aggressive with Random. They don't know each other so I had to have their hostility turned up a bit.
This is pretty much me remaking the original with none of the mistakes of the original, same thing you are doing, great minds think alike