Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
The Pirate Madeline Page18: Twice as Hot! by Randommode The Pirate Madeline Page18: Twice as Hot! by Randommode
:iconranranruuplz::iconfaveplz:

:iconfav3dplz:
:icondananana3dplz:

Back: Page 17: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…

Page 1: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 2: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 3: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 4: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 5: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 6: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 7: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 8: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 9: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 10: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 11: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 12: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 13: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 14: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 15: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 16: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…
Page 17: randommode.deviantart.com/art/…


:wow: It's Monday again... It's time for Pirate Madeline!  Last time on Pirate Madeline! Madeline was fighting with the mysterious Random Everetti, a fight she escalated to a serious level, but one Random easily deflected. But how did Random do such a high level spell without casting? And what will Madeline do now that her opponent is this powerful? Is this the end for Madeline? Is Pokey back in full swing again? Has the good ol days of Madeline returned?! All this and so much more in this week's Pirate Madeline!

Guys thanks for all your support sorry for the long delays :) I hope you all enjoy the comic! Show your love and comment below! Oh you! (lol See if you can find what I mean) 


ęPirate Madeline and all characters within Officially copyrighted with the U.S. government 2009-2013 M. INGENITO
Madeline is copyrightę to M.Ingenito HEY! Check out Madeline's other comics!!! :ahoy:  
randommode.deviantart.com/gall… randommode.deviantart.com/gall…

:icondonotuseplz::iconmyartplz:
Add a Comment:
 

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014
Pokey is a cool character.
Also, cool lighting effects!
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I am Love..Onion  It always makes me laugh that Pokey instantly loves Madeline 
Reply
:icontanajuraatomica:
TanajuraAtomica Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014
She's bad and beautiful, it can make sense... I think.
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
hahaha. She is not SO bad :) 
Reply
:iconrallyguy33:
Rallyguy33 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
Wow Random is pretty powerful. I love that Pokey wants her to sign the poster. That's hilarious.
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I love these parts with Pokey too, thanks Rally 
Reply
:iconryugassj3:
RyugaSSJ3 Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
LOLZ.
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol He wanted her to sign it 
Reply
:iconryugassj3:
RyugaSSJ3 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah,big fan yer mascot eh?
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Pokey (the turtle guy)  loves Madeline 
Reply
:iconryugassj3:
RyugaSSJ3 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Whoohoo.
Reply
:iconflyerscurse:
Flyerscurse Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
you can always trust hime to tangle with womans...
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: He did that a lot, in all versions 
Reply
:iconlinker96:
Linker96 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
:icondogeplz:
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
lol I'm glad you spotted him :) 
Reply
:iconfbende:
FBende Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
"She might be a super villain, now she's twice as hot" 

omg XD 
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you FBende! :) I thought it was funny too. :iconlaughingplz: A lot of people tell me Kayne is better then Madeline this is where I thought of the joke from 
Reply
:icontimmy22222001:
Timmy22222001 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
Sorry to be this late with the comment to another addition of Madeline there Random, don't like taking so long to get back to deviants such as yourself and for that I do apologize. *nods*

Rather like your own comment points out, a good show with taking things to the next level as opposed to playing things out longer they needed to be.  Recall you sometimes had a habit to do that and not anything against that but its was smart of you to quickly end the fight or speed it up as introductions are now needed more then the epic brawl to end all brawls, lol.

Once more you show alot of ferocity and energy in the characters both that tailor well to Madeline and with her guns at the ready and that to Random with his extremely fast paced motion with a little Pokey always on his shoulder, well done.  

For what really counts here is how well you change the scenery up between a perspective and yet still keep your story and speech going quite fluently.  Say your taking some good inspiration from most anime artists who do that very same thing and no matter what its keep your comic and the panels flowing naturally. 

More on that mention, nice reaction shot with Madeline coming back from the last panel of the last page.  Shaken up, the clouds of dust still in the air and even where you move the angle behind her just to show where her pistols are aiming and fitting in both Random and Pokey into the shot, excellent work lad.

Like before you tune very much into the depth of the movement and reactions in both your lines but especially your coloring and details.  The speed lines always hit their mark like on where Random is going into his own charge and even the way the bullets fly by the two as Pokey tries to talk him out of going after Madeline, I love it. ^-^

It all ends up with a baffled Madeline and rather enjoy her outburst and feeling of shock both for being beaten so suddenly and her trying to keep a low profile, its hilarity and action like no other.  It perfectly works in that simple shot where you get a proud Random, a questionable Pokey and a confused Madeline all going at each other like any good comic would focus it.

So a pretty damn nice page you managed to render up here Random, the comic keeps continuing to get better and twice as hot as you said it yourself. ^O^

Bravo to you Random and by the way a Merry Christmas to you as well if I don't get the chance to say so tomorrow! *tips hat*

Later,
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Tim!! Merry Christmas dude! Thank you again!! :iconkaminaonionplz: 
Reply
:iconnigz:
nigz Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love how dynamic this is man!

nice work

Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Nigel!! :) 
Reply
:iconnyquildreamer:
NyQuilDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Man, that Random is one smooth operator!
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
When I did it the first time (in 2009) both Random and Madeline were very rude (even the one I edited) so lol this is me being super super careful in their first meeting 
Reply
:iconnyquildreamer:
NyQuilDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
Right on, man. I'm likin' it so far :D
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Ny I'm slow and careful like a turtle XD 
Reply
:iconnyquildreamer:
NyQuilDreamer Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
A blue, sarcastic turtle ;)
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol I'm more teal lol 
Reply
:iconjetsetmax:
JetSetMax Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. I put off my critique long enough. Time to give it. *Ahem.*

I hate to say it, but I have to to give a proper critique: You're facing a lot of perspective and depth issues in this page. Namely with the background. in most of the panels.

Panel 1: The pier doesn't appear to be going toward the vanishing point, as it approaches the horizon line, the lines denoting the space between planks would decrease in distance from one another. This doesn't happen here, and throws off the sense of depth and perspective. Panel 2 and 3 have the same problem to a lesser extent, but it's still present.

In regards to mouths. I think you should look into doing more mouth poses. Looking up facial expressions on DA would be a good start.

It would've been better for her right arm in panel 2 to be left undrawn. Also. Her guns don't look like they're pointing at Random.

Good on you for using speed lines to emphasize speed, and good job on the tracer fire on panel 3. Maddie's pose is also good, and good on you for the using Over the Shoulder shots here.
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You're right about that all that you said, but for her not aiming at Random I wanted to show by the time she went to aim at him, he had already moved 

Thanks dude!! :iconkaminaonionplz: I do try to get better, I will watch the pier more closely next time XD 
Reply
:iconjetsetmax:
JetSetMax Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Found something you might find interesting: nsio.deviantart.com/art/Nsio-e…
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks very much dude, I hope I don't NEED this, but I can always improve XD 
Reply
:iconshinobi-gambu:
Shinobi-Gambu Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Student General Artist
That's so hilarious what Pokey did :giggle:
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Shinobi! :iconranranruuplz: I wanted him to get back to being the old Pokey again 
Reply
:iconshinobi-gambu:
Shinobi-Gambu Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Welcomiez Random :D
Reply
:icondualmask:
Dualmask Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It's like a full color manga with all the intense action of a well done anime. Keep on kicking butt, man!
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
When you say it looks like an anime I mean :) 
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol DM You are so nice :iconlaughingplz: I hope so, some days I feel like it's some crazy scribbles, but when you say it looks like that, I believe you :) 
Reply
:iconmaximwolf:
MaximWolf Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student General Artist
XD "can we stop running into gun fire?" "Nope!"  XD
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: lol I'm glad you liked that, no one else mentioned it, that was my favorite joke 
Reply
:iconmaximwolf:
MaximWolf Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student General Artist
yeah that was awesome! My bro came up with a joke that I plan on using in Ascending or Descending:
"How's the weather? Has it cleared?"
"Oh yeah, it's so clear, I can even see the clouds." :p (sarcasm; it's cloudy)
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol :) 
Reply
:iconazurerat:
AzureRat Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did they just caught her with that scarf?
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah Random's scarf has an enchantment that allows it to stretch and bend like rubber....however if someone were to have something to counter act that... :iconlaughingplz: 
Reply
:iconazurerat:
AzureRat Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Like scissors?
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
lol A good plan but she doesn't have any XD 
Reply
:iconazurerat:
AzureRat Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Man it feels like a long time since I replied.
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It's okay man :) 
Reply
:iconazurerat:
AzureRat Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You funny turtle!
Reply
:icontlwelker:
tlwelker Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist
POKEY HAS IT RIGHT. Being a villain always makes them twice as hot~!

Pokey is a nice bit of commentary in all this rough housin'!
Reply
:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconlaughingplz: He would like Ame too.  I wanted to go back to the original, and from now until like page 60 everything is going to seem very familiar just without the ecchi and with Madeline being more authoritative, also Riona will be standing in for a lot of Captain Skelly's (remember him) parts  
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×




Details

Submitted on
December 9, 2013
Image Size
1.6 MB
Resolution
1100×1778
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
2,718
Favourites
100 (who?)
Comments
207
Downloads
13
×