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Unused Page 18 by Randommode Unused Page 18 by Randommode
Hey everyone sorry for the delays. Ready for a long story short? I've been working very hard at my show-job, so when I made the original Page 18 it just wasn't coming out the way I wanted it to. It has some cool shots, but I felt it was being a bit mean again, and I can't show Madeline and Random arguing too much when they first meet or people will just be like "Wow Random and or Madeline is a jerk" 

Right now I am almost done with the new version of this page. I am going to work very hard to get it done tomorrow. On my birthday! That's right! Because I will be allowed to not work so I can work. lol But the new page will be out this week. Sorry I haven't around DA much but I will try my best to comment on everyone's work when I get the chance. I know I have commented on a lot of things, but unfortunately if you upload 12 things a week, that just makes it harder for me. 

Thanks everyone for understanding, this isn't going to be the last update this week, the real comic is coming along with the old vs new version of the comic. 
Thanks for reading :) 
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:iconaaronmizuno:
aaronmizuno Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
You know what... this just happened to me too! Starting one comic and then having to completely redo it xD
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
It can be upsetting, but I want to look back at my work with pride XD If I do something I don't like I am stuck with it 
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:iconaaronmizuno:
aaronmizuno Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I know I'll be changing a lot for when things go to print.
I'm in the process of redoing next Monday's again... :(
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Don't get too stressed 
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:iconshinobi-gambu:
Shinobi-Gambu Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student General Artist
So that's how the process all begins eh? :D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah well this is a rare time I don't use the script, what sounded good on paper was coming out bad in comic form 
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:iconadamantis:
adamantis Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist
Looking forward to the next part, but take your time :nod:
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry so sorry I have had so much to do, so much but I will get it done 
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SHITFORBRAINSCHAN Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No worries, guy. Your job must come first when all is said and done. Still supporting ya.
You're right about this having some cool looking shots in this page, especially panel 4. With that said, I suppose it was good to have this page revised, if you felt it was making your characters seem...well, out of character. Though it might have worked if you found a way to have them play off each other well enough. 

Overall, always cool to see stuff that makes the cut as well as the ones that don't! Also, happy birthday man.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
@_@ I have been in over my head dude, thanks so much for your kind words and your super nice fan art, it was amazing. Yeah it would be like if DEET Cat actually sad DEET Girl was fat or ugly and meant it, it was getting out of hand here lol 
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MaximWolf Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
the famous pirate in sketch form! Cool!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks so much Maxim :) 
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MaximWolf Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student General Artist
^^
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RKEproductions Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't worry man, its all good! Overall, you made a good decision by revising your page! Also, I have the same problem where work/school can cut into my drawing and writing, and I'm sure a lot of other people do too. So no worries, and can't wait for the next page! :D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
XD Thanks Yeah it can get very rough 
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:iconjean0987654321:
Jean0987654321 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Well, at least there's something from you :D
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Oh boy is there XD 
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:iconkskillz:
kskillz Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Professional General Artist
Hey so what is your show-job bro!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Ughhhhhh learning and learning and electrical work and redesigning sets and clay and sanding ugh XD 
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:iconkskillz:
kskillz Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
Well it sounds like it at least like a nice check!!!
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:iconsuperjustinbros:
Superjustinbros Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's some nice-looking gun.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Justin It will be there a lot as we go on :D 
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Superjustinbros Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great to hear!
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Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
wow, nice job, wonder what was going on?
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
They were arguing but I didn't like the tone it was taking 
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:icondragonkingmark:
Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
ok
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:iconapples-malus:
Apples-Malus Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Heh, I thought for this was a brick wall at first
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
XD LOL I feel like it is 
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:iconfreyad-dryden:
Freyad-Dryden Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
Oh, my, she's being sassy.
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
They both got a little too nasty (like mean spirited) 
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CelestialSaturn44 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
cool sketch outline
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks Celestial but it just wasn't coming out the way I wanted 
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:icons3rb4n:
S3rb4n Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Never mind! Expect stuff for your birthday, dude!
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:iconrandommode:
Randommode Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks but I am trying to do all I can XD 
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:icons3rb4n:
S3rb4n Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am sure that you are.
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