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The Pirate Madeline Page81: Upon Thinking (LARGE)

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:wow: It's WEDNESDAY again... It's time for Pirate Madeline! LAST TIME ON PIRATE MADELINE! Random continues to rush to Madeline's aid, but Madeline's no damsel; having defeated 2 of the four super golems by herself, no it's Random who seems to be in trouble! Will Random be able to make it to Madeline in time?! Zhin's crystal seems to think otherwise! What will happen next? Who will survive?! Will the assassin skelly succeed in his evil plan? All this and more in this week's Pirate Madeline.

Kawaii TurtleSide Note. This page... XD Oh geez, so again this took longer than I had hoped, HOWEVER. I also did something different and made this page bigger than usual. Please let me know if you find that better or not. I got so much to do every second sorry I seem to be lagging but like I always say I'm not giving up. To give up is to never know your fullest potential! No matter how hard or how difficult you must continue on always. Thank you for listening, and watching like always. Fav and comment if you enjoy the work, for now, that's the only payments Madeline receives lol. 


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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

First off, I would like to say how much I LOVE this series! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Overall, the storytelling on this page is pretty solid. Also, very nice shot on panel 5! It's super dynamic! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

With that said, I would say to be careful when it comes to cropping figures, specifically in the first panel. When it comes to cropping figures, I try to avoid cropping at the ankles, or the wrists, as it would come off to readers as a tad awkward. I feel the panel would've benefitted more if we saw more of the character on the left's hands.
Also, on the last panel, I would of maybe shown more accents in her left hand that's coming toward us, as I feel it looks a tad flat with just that black shadow.

Other than those minor issues , I think the page turned out great and I can't wait to read more! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

Cheers!